Mistakes in Evaluation Writing

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Writing program evaluation reports is always a tricky task to accomplish. As a writer, you have to be concerned about the style of writing, and the audience of the report, among other challenges. In addition, there are several common mistakes made when writing as shown below.

  • Small sample
  • No comparison group
  • Instrument use
  • Sharing too little or too much
  • Hasty generalization

Small Sample Sizes

The sample size is highly important, particularly in quantitative reports. If a sample is small it will be difficult to make strong conclusions and the findings will be considered questionable. Naturally, there is disagreement over what is thought of as an adequate sample size. However, this can be calculated mathematically. The general rule of thumb for statistical tests is a sample size of at least 30 observations.

Even if the sample size starts adequate there is still the challenge of attrition. As time progresses, people will drop out of programs and this can make the data collected on them useless.

If the sample size drops below an acceptable level all is not lost. It is important to communicate the limitations of the report and not oversell the results due to the small sample size. If you know in advance that the sample size will be small, it may be more appropriate to focus more on a qualitative study rather than a quantitative one.

Lack of Comparison Group

A problem that is often associated with sample size is the lack of a comparison group. Quantitative research is about comparing different values to see if they are the same or different. If a program is implemented, there is no way to assess the quality of it unless it is compared to individuals who did not participate in the program. Without a comparison group, there is no way to interpret the program quality.

You can’t say a program is “good” or “bad” in a vacuum. Such a statement as this must be made in comparison to a situation that is similar or the same as the context of the program with the effect of the program. In other words, quality is generally a relative concept rather than an absolute one.

There is an argument that it is unethical to deny some individuals participation in a program for the sake of a comparison group. However, it can also be said that it is unethical to state that a program is good or bad without having a comparison group.

Instrument Use

There are two common mistakes with instruments.

  1. Lack of information on the instruments
  2. Mixing and matching survey items from different instruments

Sometimes people will use instruments to explain anything about the instrument. In general, the writer of a report should provide enough information about an instrument that a reader knows that the instrument is psychometrically appropriate. This can include sharing how many items are in the instrument, the reliability score, the purpose of the instrument (what it measures), and how the instrument was used in the current study. Providing this information on the instrument helps to provide context to the study and allows for the reproducibility of the study.

A common problem, especially among people without a strong background in research is mixing and matching items from various instruments. Sometimes people think that they can take two items from one instrument along with three items from another instrument and make a new instrument.

The problem with this mix-and-match approach is that instruments are tested and developed as a block of items. To add or subtract from this block would mean that the instrument is no longer measuring what it used to measure. This new instrument would have to be retested to make sure that it is reliable and valid. Therefore, whenever employing an instrument it must be unaltered to ensure that it is capturing the data that it was set out to collect.

Sharing too Little or too Much

When writing, the evaluator must find a balance between sharing too little and too much information. This is more of an art than a science but it is something that a writer needs to know.

Too little information would be to make statements and provide no supporting data for the statement. For example, “The scores were low here”. Such a statement needs actual numbers to support it.

Another mistake would be to share too much information. Using the same example of “the scores were low here” and then sharing all the individual scores of each participant. Quantitative research is focused on the aggregation of data and not individual scores.

How much information to share is also influenced by the nature of the report. Quantitative reports will have fewer words and more numbers that share broad conclusions. A qualitative report will be much more focused on individual stories and will not have the same broad conclusions.

Generalizing

The results of a study are limited to the context. To make broad sweeping statements from a limited context is to overgeneralize. For example, if a study is conducted using reading software among 35 fifth graders in rural Texas the results of this study only apply to a similar context. You cannot say that since the program was successful here it will be successful in a different context.

However, to be fair it is possible it just has not been proven yet. This is one reason why further study is always encouraged in academic writing. As the program is proven in different contexts, then there is evidence to make a strong general conclusion about the strength of the program.

Conclusion

There are other ways mistakes can be made in the writing process. The focus here was on common errors and mental miscalculations that obscure the hard work of evaluators. When writing it is important to make sure to maintain that the conclusions that are drawn are accurate in supported by a rigorous methodology.

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